(Update on secondary page since not all passages connect to other passages yet. https://beastinthecave.itch.io/abhumans-forgotten-heroes-test-v01)

-Fixed the bugs that I wanted too (hopefully)

-Rewrote some parts (again)

-Did minor spellchecking

I decided to host the new and updated versions on the secondary page, however I will still be posting devlogs on this page.

In any case probably gonna do some major rewrites, however since I already accounted for that in my last estimate it should not make much of a difference for you guys. Either the game comes out this year or the beginning of next year. 

I am not quite happy with the tone of the story. I have been trying to make a slightly self centered MC so that the player can affect their character development. But I have been finding that trying to make a protag that is not a good person, but still likable instead of unbearable is kinda hard :(

Another thing I am trying to change is to not frontload too much worldbuilding.

So I am probably just going to add easily skippable radio segments at the start of every chapter similar to "We Wretched Creatures."

Anyways gonna continue to rewrite the same seven short chapters over and over again until they are decent while I keep you guys updated on my progress. If things go well a "complete" (and by complete I mean the story has a beginning, middle and end) version should be dropping sooner rather than later.

I really do not want this to end up as another abandoned WIP in the itch io graveyard so I am gonna try to keep the  chapters as short as possible.

I can always expand and adjust a shorter story once its finished, I cannot however fix an overly long epic tale with loads of long prose quite as easily -_-